busboys and poets

I am not Christian, or even religious, but I can appreciate religious/spiritual poetry and prose. What I cannot forgive is apologizing for your faith, as you did in the summary ...

Oh, my city. =] I'm going to review the new edition solely; I hope this is okay. 1. Cement sidewalks Crisscross my pavement And iron buildings dig their feet Deep ...

You may be a good writer for your age, but there are quite a few things along the grammatical and punctuation lines. I've listed a few below: There once was ...